Outstanding! I love this story, and I love the way you've managed to make the Neaderthal acceptably intelligent and planful. This is a very exciting read!! I'm loving it, Kieran.
It's actually interesting to look into, because most descriptions of them actually paint them as physically stronger than us. And smarter than how they are stereotypically. While the og Humans kind of ended relatively short, I think this redraft will do more to include Young's tribe and other Alien sects.
Outstanding! I love this story, and I love the way you've managed to make the Neaderthal acceptably intelligent and planful. This is a very exciting read!! I'm loving it, Kieran.
It's actually interesting to look into, because most descriptions of them actually paint them as physically stronger than us. And smarter than how they are stereotypically. While the og Humans kind of ended relatively short, I think this redraft will do more to include Young's tribe and other Alien sects.