Kieran, what a wonderful opening for what promises to be a very exciting story. I love the way the aliens regard earth and the bipeds they see. Their awareness of the damage the bipeds could cause instantly screams FORESHADOWING! I love it. Are we going to get a description of Urlak'thul and Mokvel? I'm looking forward to chapter 2.
Kieran, what a wonderful opening for what promises to be a very exciting story. I love the way the aliens regard earth and the bipeds they see. Their awareness of the damage the bipeds could cause instantly screams FORESHADOWING! I love it. Are we going to get a description of Urlak'thul and Mokvel? I'm looking forward to chapter 2.
I may do that. I'm hopeless with character description at times. I based them off the stereotypical grey aliens you see in a lot of other media.