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Connor Conor's's avatar

Boom! Very cool story. Nice work 💯

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Kieran Stott's avatar

Thank you kindly, I've been meaning to revisit the OG draft of this serial. If only to better structure the chapters as a lot of them ended up being weirdly short.

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Sandy Shaller's avatar

A very exciting second installment in the story. It was a very good idea to translate the Neanderthals instincts and learned behaviors into thoughts for the reader. Excellent.

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