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Sandy Shaller's avatar

Kieran, that was an EXCELLENT story with a terrific ending. The introduction set the reader up but didn't give away the conclusion. Well done!

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Kieran Stott's avatar

Thanks it’s loosely based on a story I had on an old laptop. It was easy enough to adapt to set it in the Fall Years timeline (kind of) since the ship launched twenty years before it but got lost in the Aether. The Obelisk is similar to the ones also seen in the Ones We Forgot and what I will probably add to Roswell in future updates.

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Sandy Shaller's avatar

I love hearing the history of a writer's idea. I have a feeling that all of my ideas, in one way or another come three books that informed my love of reading: Lewis Carroll's ALICE book, DANDELION WINE by Ray Bradbury, and THE ONCE & FUTURE KING by T.H. White.

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